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05 January 2007 @ 10:01 pm
Offered  


This is the feedback post for offered.

Feeling like the dirtybadwrongness is setting your head on fire? Want to gawk over how hot and deadly sexy Jareth is, or how adorable Will is when he blushes? Tell us!
 
 
 
meretrix: fear me love melaisserais on January 6th, 2007 05:28 am (UTC)
whoot! I asked thatotherperv how i could leave feedback on this, and she told me you'd created this comm. brilliant! I'm loving Offered so far, but i'm a little behind. Very hot!
Wycked: Fine Close Upnyghtpet on January 7th, 2007 01:48 am (UTC)
Thank you! This one is really fun. And come on, Jareth? Will/James? That's some serious pretty in one place, haha.

Thanks for checking it out!
Melthatotherperv on January 6th, 2007 05:39 am (UTC)
in case you were wondering. I'm enjoying offered. repeatedly. and with great fervor.

*cough*
Wycked: James Bright Smilenyghtpet on January 6th, 2007 05:29 pm (UTC)
Yeah. We noticed.






*snickers*
Melthatotherperv on January 6th, 2007 02:29 pm (UTC)
see, this is good cuz now I have a place I can bug you even when you're not on msn. so I must say.

"I think I'm clean." He cleared his throat, but the damage was done. Hand still in his.
EVIL BITCH.

bwahahahaha. the fruit porn, it was wrong. just as I knew it would be. *jacks jareth off out of pity*
Wycked: Spike Look At That Lipnyghtpet on January 6th, 2007 05:28 pm (UTC)
BWAHAhahahahahahaha

What a way for me to wake up. Gettin' called an evil bitch. Pft.

As for the fruit porn...yeah. Knew we were goin' there, didn't feel entirely right about it cuz it is just SO wrong, but I HAD to do it. The angst was killin both of them and we had to break the ice a lil!

And for angst, there is a way to salve the wounds, man. Porn. Porn heals. Not completely, but it opens a big, fat door, know what I'm sayin? *snickers*

*couldn't take the staring at each other and awkward conversation any longer*
Mel: angel jesus mary joseph (by lit_gal)thatotherperv on January 13th, 2007 01:36 pm (UTC)
OMFG, THANK YOU. hahahahhaah. jesus is right. dude. fuck. that was so intense, I can't even. I can't even quote lines. especially since now I am inexplicably (haha) back in the porn-reading mood and must go ctach up on the rest of my reading. my flist thanks you.

fuck. with the restraining and the growling and thrusting and...head cradling and....*whimpers* and I love that Will loved it when Jareth came. *glurble*

I can only imagine that the conversation last night went something like this: man, she's gonna continue being a pain our asses until we let jareth come...so you wanna? yeah. shit. we'll never hear the end of this.

:D *snuggles you both all up*
denied_heavendenied_heaven on January 13th, 2007 10:09 pm (UTC)
hahaha
actually, it just.. happened lol
i just couldn't stop him man, i couldn't
and the convo actually came after *snicker*
'mel is going to LOVE you in the morning'
ha
Melthatotherperv on January 13th, 2007 10:17 pm (UTC)
hahahaha. oh, I did. I loved you hard and long.

*cough*

seeeeeee, they wanted to get off together. they did, man, you can't fight fate!
Melthatotherperv on January 15th, 2007 02:43 pm (UTC)
OMFG. I hope you were very very tired last night and that you slept very very well, because you just left Will on the verge of getting his first blowjob. SERIOUSLY? ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?

*wanders away grumbling and pouts in the corner*

I know it was probably like 4am or something ridiculous, but *whimpers*
Wycked: Spike Sleep Like The Deadnyghtpet on January 15th, 2007 06:19 pm (UTC)
Hey now, missy. You got your dream of a certain someone rubbing one out on Will, you can just hold your horses! *wags finger*

But yes, it was 6am and one of my eyes was refusing to stay open and I was thinkin I needed at least six hours to function well today. And if I DIDN'T function well today, I wouldn't be able to WRITE the first blowjob! So nyeh!

*pokes*

*loves ya*

He'll get it tonight. Don't fret. Both of them are VERY happy right now, haha.
Melthatotherperv on January 18th, 2007 01:49 am (UTC)
omg, there's plot! haah. yay for plot *hops*

wanna try messaging me? cuz my attempts are gettng nada.
Wycked: Spike Excuse My Hot Bodnyghtpet on January 18th, 2007 02:03 am (UTC)
Stoopid msn. *kicks*

Yay for plot! hahaha
Melthatotherperv on January 30th, 2007 09:55 am (UTC)
*whimpers* I woke up from passing out on the couch and checked up on offered and....with the rocking and the mewling and the fast learning. *dies*

He mewled brokenly, hands transferring to the cold stone behind him to tilt more of his hips into the movements.

"Bed..please?" His knees weren't in excrutiating pain yet, but he was thinking they were going to be soon. Most definitely when all was said and done. Let his arms wrap around Jareth's neck again, thighs squeezing, not wanting to break contact but not wanting to stay on the window any longer either.

Managed to get the breath and brain together enough to mumble into Jareth's neck, hips slowing to almost a stop, still rubbing errantly. "Knees are killing me."


OMG EVIL. EVIL. if I could capitalize that further, I would. you stop *there*? I guess you guys have to sleep *grumblewhinecry*

my knees are killing me *snerk* bet Jareth would like to hear him say THAT more often. *cough*
Wycked: Jared The Killnyghtpet on January 30th, 2007 11:26 pm (UTC)
*shakes the naughty finger at you for poor Will* No on-the-knees. Not yet. *cough* Who knows. Iun know, lol.

You didn't want us stopping there? Well, should we have just not written it? I suppose we could keep that in mind the next time we log in. *makes a note to stop with the porn*

There. Does that fix the problem for ya? *snerk*
Melthatotherperv on January 30th, 2007 11:37 pm (UTC)
lmao, evil girl.
Wycked: Spike Stupidity Cracks Me Upnyghtpet on January 30th, 2007 11:40 pm (UTC)
*slow blink* I have no idea what you're talking about. *trots off*
Dani: Dean pen grinumbralillium on August 10th, 2007 05:56 am (UTC)
Hadn't been supposed to happen like this, he'd been intending to seduce the boy into his world. He hadn't expected the boy to seduce his way into his cold heart.

*snicker* Ahhh, Jareth. You are SO gone. *smirk*
Wycked: James Adorable Hairnyghtpet on August 19th, 2007 05:52 pm (UTC)
*whistles* poor boy.
*snickers*
Effervescent iridescenceangel726 on December 16th, 2007 04:50 am (UTC)
(I know, you're probably like "this girl again, what?!" but I just found out about this comm!)

This is probably my favorite of all the fics I've read so far! I never really thought about this pairing but it's so dirty/delicious/hot!
Wycked: Fine Close Upnyghtpet on December 16th, 2007 08:02 am (UTC)
Yay! It's definitely a fun one.
Haha, we are thrilled you're having a good time here! Have fun poking around!
elebridith: OwlSpikeelebridith on January 4th, 2008 10:39 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. God. How... how did I... miss this? Great. Another series I started reading, as if I don't have enough in the works already *smacks head*
But... but JARETH???? Goodness gracious great balls of fire - that's the first movie character ever I had fantasies about! Well, I was sixteen and a bit out of my Duran Duran phase *lol* but I still think the look he throws Sarah in that glass bubble is SO damn hot! And those eyes! Not to mention that "As the world falls down" is such a sweet song! And... ok I stop now. *grins* Just only finished the first part. It will take me some time to get through it, expect more incoherent feedback later in the year! :-)
Wycked: Jareth Enchantnyghtpet on January 6th, 2008 09:14 am (UTC)
OMG! Look at your adorable little owl icon! *pets*

This is one of my favorites, if I had to pick a favorite. I am SO glad you found it and are having such a wonderful time!

*hugs you* Can't wait for you to read more!
elebridith: OwlSpikeelebridith on January 6th, 2008 06:31 pm (UTC)
The owl is sitting in my office - I called her Spike! Well, spikey feathers and such. And I couldn't resist - going to work and start the day with a "Good morning, Spike!"? Priceless!